August 18th, 2006 by Ajay
I liked this one because it helped to explain that box of human parts that can be seen in a couple of strips. However, it needed some work. I’ve tweaked the words a little and made changes that I think make the comic a little bit funnier. Below the comic is the original entry. You people tell me what one works better: the one in the comic or the entry.
Panel 1 –
Jon: Hey Stew, why do we have a box of hands under the counter?
Stew: Funny you should ask….
Panel 2 –
Little Girl: Hey Mistuh, do you gots any band aids?
Panel 3 –
Panel 4 –
Stew: BAND AIDS!? MWA HAHAHAHAHA!
Panel 5 –
Stew: Does this piss hole look like a hospital to you, you little hussy!?
Panel 6 –
Stew: We sell clothes and clothing accesorys, take your wounds elsewhere!
Panel 7 –
Little Girl: But it hurts *whimper*
Panel 8 –
Stew: So I cut her hands off with a box cutter and carterized the stumps,
then put the hands in this empty box.
Jon: Makes sense to me.
Runner up #2 coming soon!Â